From an artists point of view right now its not bad. A few touch ups in places and it will sound even better. Keep up the work man.
Its not bad. Could use some more work though on parts and i agree with the fact that your sytrus should be faded a little more..makes it less noticable and sounds way better.
After all that keep up the work and it should come out clean.
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